urmelino ([info]urmelino) wrote,
@ 2006-04-15 16:15:00
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Current mood: hopeful
Current music:Bright Eyes

The next two weeks will be very important for me: There will be the decision, what will be my professional future, where and what I will work and where I will live the next years. Everything is pending...
My way to deal with such situations is writing poems and interestingly enough I usually choose English as language to express my feelings and thoughts.


Clouds

Diving into the clouds,
no fear, no terror, no dread.
Only the flickering lights of a city
keeping down under your sorrows.
Only you in the clouds of god,
following the wind like flies the light.
Not knowing whats awaiting tomorrow
just to be faster than life.
Moments of happiness
are thoughts of your brain,
but stronger than anything real.
Controlling the universe and part of it,
no pain, no time, no death.
Thoughts live an eternal life.
Nothing dies if someone remembers.
Nothing exists if no one remembers.
Heaven is darkening, clouds disappear,
you are sent back to life.
Not to suffer - but to remember
them and their thoughts.
No fear, no terror, no dread.
Wait for the next morning and dive into clouds.


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[info]lokakuu85
2006-04-15 05:54 pm UTC (link)
Mi amas vian poemon! Estas tre bela. :)

Mi esperas, ke mi rajtas diri, ke vi faris iomete da erarojn en kelkaj lokoj.... Sed, ili ne kontraŭiras la temo de via poemo. Mi amas poezion, kaj mi skribi ofte ankaŭ. Mia problemo kun poemskribi estas enuiĝi pri rimigi ĉiun lineon de poezio mi skribadas. :)

Vi skribis agrablan poemon.

Ĵoana

Postskribo-
Mi provis plibonigadas mian Esperanton, sed estas malfacile ĉar mi ne havas interretan aliron hejme ankoraŭ. :(

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[info]urmelino
2006-04-15 09:00 pm UTC (link)
Bonege, mi ĝojas ke vi ŝatas mian poemon!

Certe vi rajtas diri, ke mi faris erarojn - kontraŭe mi petas vin: Diru al mi ĉiujn miajn erarojn, por ke mi ne ripetos tiujn estonte!!

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[info]lokakuu85
2006-04-18 12:44 am UTC (link)
Bone, jen mia korektoj...

Lineo 2 - ...no frighten... eble "no fright" aŭ "no terror, horror, or dread"
Lineo 3 - ...flackering... flickering
Lineo 18 - you are send back to life eble "you are sent back to life?
Lineo 21 - ...no frighten... same kiel lineo 2
Lineo 22 - ...for next morning... eble "for the next morning" aŭ "for tomorrow morning"

Mi pensas, ke via angla poemo sonos pli bone kun chi-tiuj korektoj.

Ĝis revido!

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[info]urmelino
2006-04-18 08:56 pm UTC (link)
Multon dankon Ĵoana! Jen estas la pliboniĝa poemo kun viaj proponoj kaj korektoj!

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[info]punkidpen
2006-04-19 08:39 pm UTC (link)
nice poem from you.

If everything is pending, surely your mind is a little homeless. But it's also freedom what you describe. Don't hesitate to walk into the unknown. Choose the real right thing for your self is the hardest part in life, and it's connected with uncertainty each time. Pearl Jam has this great line: coming up a which way sign ... all good truants must decide

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